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The ashen moonglade
nervously quivered as the
unclothed nymph immersed
her tantalizing physique
beneath the soft ripples
of the tepid mere.

My Moral thoughts
swiftly turned impure as the
amatory maiden slipped
her soft, inky locks
into the obscure depths
of my neglected mind.

My dazed heart
fell to pieces as her
knightly prince emerged
his swarthy countenance
from the murky waves
of the tepid mere.

The desolate moon
contemptuously sighed as the
stone-like corpse fell
deeply into the unforgiving,
tenebrous catacomb
of my neglected mind.
I really don't know where this came from... I think it kinda sucks, but I was wondering what y'all think. So, what do you think?
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cyre's avatar
Its not bad, not bad at all. It just needs a bit of clarity.